Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Angel In My Arms Comments

Rating: 4.3

Shiny little eyes
smile up at me
Tiny chubby hands
touch my face
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Israh Sadan
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Susan Jarvis 01 August 2008

Overwhelmingly beautiful. S :)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 August 2008

...fine analogy......10+

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Nkululeko Mdudu 31 July 2008

good one, the message is clear and beautifully so.

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Greenwolfe 1962 31 July 2008

This is a sweet writing but it has little to it that I will remember. This writing needs something to say that will make this special. It doesn't have it now. I cannot recommend it for that reason. GW62

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silver phoenix 30 July 2008

nice poem, i like it

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Catrina Heart 30 July 2008

beautiful angel, a babe...you have! ! ! sweet and nice...

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Israh Sadan

Israh Sadan

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