One night as I sat beneath a tree
I cried to our dear Lord above
I looked up into the open sky and hoped he'd answer me
Lord I'm lost, I've traveled far but I still seem to roam
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awwww.......... very sad poem but i loved it its very asome that you have jesus on your side asome i have him on my side too. keep it up i give you 10/10 good job.
he read this every day and he says what I say precious child of mine no need to moan an whine for pain is absent of me and my old eyes do see Walk i can, even run I'm in the light of the son so take a break and smile it's this i do wish my child i look o'er you each day I'm the footstep along the way.
great poem =) you're lucky he answered you... I stopped trying with god, he never answered me. I worship someone else now but i give you 10/10 =)
Another well written poem. you have a beautiful way with words. Sorry for your loss. God Bless x
this is awsome, sad and touching poem. Sorry for your loss. It's not easy to lose our loved ones. Though i never got the chance to hold my grandfather, even he's chosen to be an angel but a li'l too soon.
awwww.....i really like this.....great poem. very sweet ending! keep it up!