Friday, October 3, 2008

Angel In Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

One night as I sat beneath a tree
I cried to our dear Lord above
I looked up into the open sky and hoped he'd answer me
Lord I'm lost, I've traveled far but I still seem to roam
...
Read full text

Brie Carter
COMMENTS

awwww.....i really like this.....great poem. very sweet ending! keep it up!

0 0 Reply
~ Evelina Kononenko ~ 26 June 2009

awwww.......... very sad poem but i loved it its very asome that you have jesus on your side asome i have him on my side too. keep it up i give you 10/10 good job.

0 2 Reply

he read this every day and he says what I say precious child of mine no need to moan an whine for pain is absent of me and my old eyes do see Walk i can, even run I'm in the light of the son so take a break and smile it's this i do wish my child i look o'er you each day I'm the footstep along the way.

0 0 Reply
Tessa Richardson 30 January 2009

great poem =) you're lucky he answered you... I stopped trying with god, he never answered me. I worship someone else now but i give you 10/10 =)

0 1 Reply
Sarah Holmes 16 December 2008

Another well written poem. you have a beautiful way with words. Sorry for your loss. God Bless x

0 0 Reply
Reshma Ramesh 07 December 2008

well penned...........keep the faith...............

0 0 Reply
Mimzy Sue 01 November 2008

this is awsome, sad and touching poem. Sorry for your loss. It's not easy to lose our loved ones. Though i never got the chance to hold my grandfather, even he's chosen to be an angel but a li'l too soon.

0 0 Reply
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 15 October 2008

so lovely and true, thanks for sharing 10

0 0 Reply
Ryan Thompson 08 October 2008

that was so beautiful i loved it -ryan

0 0 Reply
Tia Maria 03 October 2008

that is so beautiful .... :) 10

0 0 Reply
Brie Carter

Brie Carter

Dalton
Close
Error Success