Sunday, June 24, 2007

Angel Ghost Comments

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forgive me my love
for the tears
you will shed
for the pain i will cause
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Lorena Walker
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purple moon 25 June 2007

beautiful.........sad..........poignant. well done.

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Untitiled and unnamed 24 June 2007

Sad..but well written, you paint the picture you want readers to see, very well i thought, lee..x

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Patricia Gale 24 June 2007

Straight out and to the point... remorse at its best..

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That poem was beautiful... keep writing Rissa

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