Sunday, July 18, 2010

Angel Feet….1907 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fell in a dream munching heaven,
Left just one, did all eleven.

Dreamt of a castle made of cream.
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Ken E Hall 16 October 2014

A happy look at children who are all angels at the start of life...now look at you now a master of poetry...loved the poem...regards

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Ken E Hall 16 October 2014

A happy look at children who are all angels at the start of life...now look at you now a master of poetry...loved the poem...regards

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Karen Sinclair 04 March 2014

A really unique piece which made me smile....loved the title too beautifully written sir

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Heather Wilkins 01 September 2013

excellent recall of child hood days sweet and charming days

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Yasmin Khan 03 February 2013

It reminices lovely childhood days...'heard the musical, papa's snore'..I picked as my fav

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Shumaila Bari 13 September 2012

A fascinating visit to a Fairy-land captured beautifully. The sweetest one I must say.

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Marieta Maglas 21 July 2010

A great poem and it has certainly captured the hearts of your readers. Your final two lines tie the poem in beautifully

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Indira Babbellapati 20 July 2010

you are a master of couplets!

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