Angel Eyes Comments

beautiful...........

This poem is amazing I love it It is so deep You are very romantic I can see it by reading this poem You love company

Wow, amazing rhythm, it's tantalizing and powerful. You can feel the pain as clear as though it were your own.

Beautifully written and wonderfully rhymed. It has a rhythym to it thats sucks you in and holds you there - you have read the next line, you have to know what is next - just the emotion of the speaker.

I like the line 'On a whim she lost my mind'. I understand the sentiment completely, the feeling of being entirely consumed with thoughts of a woman whose heart you cannot and will not ever win, a woman you would just as soon forget if you could, but you cannot. You are haunted by her and cannot let it go. Good read!