Saturday, March 31, 2007

Angel And Beast Comments

Rating: 5.0

We could changes our ways.
That is, if we wanted to.
But we rest between
Angel and Beast.
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Charlie F. Kane
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Greenwolfe 1962 31 July 2008

It is good that you write about useful things in a clear manner. You do not easte the ink in your pen. GW62

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Yes No 11 May 2007

A nice poem, but I feel that someone of your ability would have wanted to explore the ideas of the angel and the beast some more. Compared to other poems of yours the imagery is usually more vivid. However, I enjoyed the poem nonetheless.

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Charlie F. Kane

Charlie F. Kane

Solihull, Birmingham
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