Thursday, December 4, 2008

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Rating: 2.8

A whisper in the clouds at night
where concrete stars provide no light
the beauty here will never fade
like dewdrops off the morning blade
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Kale Beaudry
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Chloe Young 14 July 2009

knowing where this is coming from makes this poem even more beautiful. the rhyme makes it easy to read and it still hits the spot of adoration, care and pain <3 10 chloe

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whisper in the clouds at night where concrete stars provide no light the beauty here will never fade.... dear amazing write.. wonderful i am exciated... read mine moon, how are you and o mother

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Eric Lopez 03 June 2009

Beautifully written, good job :)

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Kale Beaudry

Kale Beaudry

Vancouver, BC, Canada
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