Thursday, August 4, 2016

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You once called me
A special name
I never heard it
Ever again
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Julie Smith
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 04 August 2016

Legends as well as history tell us how people in the past have made sacrifices for love. In all these stories, it is the that won. In your story too same thing has happened. Death of he girl, was a different incident. Love spills out from each verse you have written, and reader feels that. Thanks for sharing.

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 04 August 2016

Although she died later, and left say Luke alone. I would say Luke loved her really! how can he marry a girl he met in hours, if he never loved her? I loved it, thank you for sharing

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