Thursday, May 10, 2012

Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

(drum beat)
I fall down and down
Demon nymphs dancing round
With open eyes I view this sick world
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darkness reigns
COMMENTS
Sandy Player 27 December 2012

Vivid imagery and powerful connotations. Very well done.

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Ronn Michael Salinas 24 July 2012

Made me smile :) btw it's 'beautiful'

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Ramesh Rai 15 May 2012

well versed, a nice poem keep it up

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