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The lamenting of the heart only those who have loved can tell the sorrow and desire in words

Poem composed of true feelings... don't worry brother your mermaid will definitely love you....

A touching poem and very eloquently written, well done.

interesting love mystical poem-thank you for sharing

Wonderful writing, the lovely heart that you posses deliver a warmth of feeling. Mystery in search, and standing with waved emotion you enclose the feel deeper than your skin..Oh the beautiful writing is here again, in your hand :) 'Angel of the sea'? ? so maybe you can use oxygen tank to reach her hahahaha..joking..lovely poem, like it so much! you really have talented hand no no not hand but mind because mind birthing your idea hahaha :) _Unwritten Soul

This is an amazing poem, Vipins! Full of mystery, like you cannot capture the depth of the person you were writing for. Like she is a mystical being you want to treasure, but too afraid she might loose that mystery you hold in your heart...