Angel who is standing here looking and talking to me.
Near this tall old tree that we know.
Giggling togever about our past that we shared.
Living and sharing what we know about life.
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Touching words clearly conveying the intimacy between the speaker and her late loved one. The happy tone makes the poem even more touching. Nice write, Kelly. I feel you could enhance the finish even more, though, by expressing physical contact, for instance 'Even though she's not here for me to hold'. Anyway, I like your poem here, Kel. Warm regards, Gina.
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Touching words clearly conveying the intimacy between the speaker and her late loved one. The happy tone makes the poem even more touching. Nice write, Kelly. I feel you could enhance the finish even more, though, by expressing physical contact, for instance 'Even though she's not here for me to hold'. Anyway, I like your poem here, Kel. Warm regards, Gina.