Monday, November 28, 2005

Angel Comments

Rating: 4.9

I squint through the keyhole,
Push open the door,
Pearly white feathers lie strewn on the floor.
From pigeons these feathers could well have been hacked,
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EMMA Funnell
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Siddharth Singh 31 July 2009

This one is incredible.

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Andrew Blakemore 05 February 2008

Excellent work Emma, great flow to this poem. Andrew '10'

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Tania Rodway 16 April 2007

My god Emma, your poems are amazing! Honestly I can't believe it, your poems move me to tears, I didn't realize you had such a talent, i'd love to write like you, although you do inspire me to start (or try *cringe*) . Please keep it up, I want to read more! Me :)

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Jill rodway. 02 January 2022

Very good.

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Hazem Al Jaber 07 June 2006

another great and lovely one.. really you have a warm feelings, which that can`t see it in any one.. your writtings go out from your heart.. and i wish you more and more.. yours hazem

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Sarah Cornell 22 May 2006

oh im likin this 1 emz. these are a lot better than all your other 1s you did a few yrs bak (no offence lol) . anyways hope you think the same bout mine: -D lol xx

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