Oh, angel thy comeliness
Will bloom the flowers
Of my blue night.
Come unto my Palace!
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You brought magic of a fairy night in such an amazing poem..Cristina Teodor
Beautiful east motive Vipins...10... Thanks for the invitation. Tsira.
The unsung song......bloomed in our hearts, brings out the magic of the peom. truly beautiful like flowers of love blooming in hearts. Narayanan.
together we shall sing....very good line indeed......i like the poem very much...i enjoyed it throughly....you r a great poet
When she gets in the palace she will love you for this love poem very nice...regards
this poem like a beautiful bird with its colored wings. really a great work....10marks
Another master piece, Vipins. I agree very much with the comments below. This poem is very rich in images and the contrasts used give it a great flavour.
You are a magician of words Vipins. With your wand you turn simple words in a dream of colors and multitudes of images...You paint the marvelous lines of your poetry as Leonardo Da Vinci in Mona Lisa. A masterpiece.10++++
wow its a really great poem it sounds wonderful great job: D
wow this is a really great poem it sound wonderful and amazing great job: D
This is a really a nice one! Soft and tender thoughts!