Tuesday, April 21, 2009

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It glimmers and fades
No power sustains
In a conversation so mundane
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Aiden Florence
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Amanda Ford 24 November 2009

you obviously dont fail at everything if you can write such great poems! keep it up!

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Lilly Mandrell 27 April 2009

I like it its good. Feeling like you fail no matter what is in everyones head, and you put it down vary well.: ]

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