Andy Comments

how cute. this poem is really sweet. :)

Hi Aurora - love the poem - it is an excellent example of a narrative poem and it has good rhythm and good rhyme. Don't worry about the spelling and grammar Angel - I understood the message and that is what is important - a good message is more important than 'Harvard' spelling and 'Yale' grammar (don't tell Johnny Navarro I said that! ! ! !) It is great (these days) when we can meet someone we can trust. We can all learn something from each other and someone who can help us with MATH is like GOD! ! ! ! ! ! Often poeple (who we really like) move in and out of our lives - just accept it Angel - its natural. Thanks for sharing - Love thru Poetry - JOHN - LOL.

It's nice to be in love. But as to the poem you need to be grammatically correct and check your spelling. Other than that it is ok.

it sounds like you are in love and its complicated. it always is :) im happy you found someone like that. never lose contact with them :)