Saturday, October 1, 2011

Andromeda Comments

Rating: 5.0

My indigested hope
Feeds her empty heart.
And when my tears
Of long formed burden
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Stefanie Fontker
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Vipins Puthooran 02 October 2011

And blooming love too, , , , I like this poem....economical but hit where it wants to be fix..... Great poem

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Allemagne Roßmann 01 October 2011

ecstatic write..thought provoking...you thought a lot for sure before you came out with this one..

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Stan Petrovich 01 October 2011

I didf not think, until nore, that my ou, matmbe a froce fo Nature to contend with, I hate being redundantm but if you midded Grard Manley Hopkis poem of identical titlie, ANDRMENDA, read it and fall to your knees I did did once or twicr. His words are vthe o'pish & puncture of out=r ms=perfrction!

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