Tuesday, May 20, 2008

~~andrew's~~ First Steps Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ten Toes..here he goes..
The right foot leads the other
Adventurous eyes fixed on his mother
Her caring voice echoing
...
Read full text

Pirate Love Magic Man
COMMENTS
Catrina Heart 19 January 2009

Awesome to pen the memories of a baby...so light and fun.10

0 0 Reply
~Crazy Ann~ 13 January 2009

the first of many firsts time flies just remeber to act like them and take time to smell the roses right along with them and all the firsts will b remebered together.thanks for the smile.

1 0 Reply

Awww...How cute! !

1 0 Reply
jennifer hall 10 December 2008

awww...that is so cute

1 0 Reply
**paris* forever forgotten** 09 December 2008

awww, that is adorable! love it.

1 0 Reply
totally disturbed 22 November 2008

children are such a blessing I thank god everyday for my daughter she's the best..

1 0 Reply
Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

aweeeeeeee so sweet...loved this one....and it reminded me of my son

1 0 Reply
*Trusting You* 31 October 2008

thats sooo cute! good job. *Purkey Girl*

1 0 Reply
Aijaz Asif 21 September 2008

ten toes here he goes....lol, an excelent write...thanks

1 0 Reply
Stacey Watts 08 September 2008

Oh I love this poem. It is excellent It plays on my mommy emotions.. Great job.

1 0 Reply
Pied Piper Berry 05 September 2008

An adorable piece...... Well done.

1 0 Reply

Beautiful, I don't have any children of my own, but I can bet it's pretty hard watching them grow up.

1 0 Reply
, aryaindia 19 July 2008

A cute poem that reminds every parent reader of their own kid's first steps and of course, the mother in their trial. Thanks for sharing....reminiscensing, arya

1 0 Reply
Egi David Perdana 08 July 2008

the psychal poem, great one of the great

1 0 Reply
DELETED NOW 05 July 2008

...parents always seem to teach their childern how to leave...think about it. I like the poem btw.

1 0 Reply
Close
Error Success