Andrew Comments

Your writing reminds me of Lee Crowells style.

this is nicely penned...I enjoy the beginning/ending lines as they allow this piece to radiate warmth..

It must have been tough to see a mate leave- hope you keep in touch with him. 10

You write so well about death and loss and the dying, with such uncluttered empathy.

this is nicely written..hope this is not written in teary eyes and trembling fingers..i like the flow tho it shows sadness..time to say goodbye...the hardest words to express..naizz

This poem is poignant, but unlike with other poets who try to convey suffering, I do not suffer for this art do to sentimentality. Enjoyable.

This was a special piece of writing because it took the reader along with the writer. That is hard to do. I must pay tribute to it by giving it a good score. GW62

Sentimental & sad penning from a soft heart.

Oh Jerry. This could only have been written by someone with a surfeit of years on this planet and the emotional openness of a woman. Andrew is agonizingly sad, partly because you never descend into sentimentality in telling his story. A sublime poem. love, Allie xxxx