Friday, April 15, 2005

Andre Comments

Rating: 4.3

According to the legends, of days so old
there was a hero, of might and ego

His name was Andre the handsome lad
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Taher Shemaly
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warner treuter 19 May 2010

A lyrical reminder that love can be dangerous, and that there is a way in which at least some people can love too much. Hardly anything left of poor Andre but empty space. Quite some battle. Quite some story.

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Rania Hammoud 07 January 2010

It's really a great poem u write so well, and hav a gd background about past cultures.The story is interesting, good style in narration, with keeping the rhyme all the poem long.I most liked these verses. down to her feet he was planted like an arrow that a lover for his love must bend so low can not behold for your love reached the marrow and upon his and inspite of his armoury his body was made hollow tongue she did make the furrow And i liked so much ur poem (After You) but it didn't work to leave a comment there i dunno know why.

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