Saturday, April 9, 2022

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Rating: 5.0

I don't want to write another love poem
I am tired and the night is becoming day
As my eyelids slowly close on
Another sleepless night
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Very very emotional, heart-wrenching. At the same time subliminal and quite poetic. Love makes days short and nights even shorter. Separation makes every second of the life last a lifetime. Sleep avoids the eyes, so does smile, the lips and memories smother the heart.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 April 2022

Always wishing you happiness, dear friend LeeAnn

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 April 2022

Sleepless nights and haunting memories. Sad and lonely. A poem full of heart wrenching emotions.......10

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 10 April 2022

Restless mind and restless heart try to find solace in peace. Nice poem.5*****

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Soran M. H 10 April 2022

With love we forget the worries and the shortness of life, here the reader encourages to look for that love even if its lost! then we can build our life again and get rid of lack of sleep, well done with 5*

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Soran M. H 10 April 2022

To write another poem Since yr love for me has disappeared Into the depths of the vortex I pick up my pieces and fled Looking for you

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Ruta Mohapatra 10 April 2022

Tinged with sadness...

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 April 2022

Your tale of heartache and sleepless nights was beautifully written, LeeAnn.

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Doreen Weinhurst 10 April 2022

I know the feeling.

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Richard Wlodarski 09 April 2022

Another beautiful heart wrenching poem, LeeAnn.In empathizing with you, your poem made me reflect. And inspired me to write one.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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