Saturday, November 12, 2016

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Rating: 0.5

play lightly your recorder
play smoothly too-lee-lie
sing airs from dream disorder
play life as by the by
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Haikal Hamzah 02 December 2016

This is my review of this poem named Lefty and Ned by Rich Soos. I really liked this poem and I would give this a rating 7/10. This is very interesting poem to me because it is about these two crooks that steal money for their daily bread. They planned to rob a bank that was opposite from their hotel that they were living at. One day after they had planned their robbery, they had dug underground making a tunnel into the banks safe. They planted a stick of dynamite to blow up the safe. Sadly in the end they both died because of the dynamite blowing the building causing it to collapse on them and buried them.

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R Soos 02 December 2016

LOL! ! ! - fun humor, thanks!

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