My love so intense
like fragrant musk's incense
Would
permeate you
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My divine eyes calmer than sky would chase you daze you amaze you My Baby! And you will shed tears of joy. The best lines in my eye. Any person with a heart would long for being that baby...when you are so promising a lover. Great poem! ! Thanks for the creation.
The diverse shades of love expressed with poetic precision. Each nuance has been finely etched. Do you even need to ask the rating?
My love is so high, so devine, so hot, so calm ans sooooooo beautiful..........Love is eternal, you dear Anjali, the poem is so lovely! ! ! I need the miracle of words..Thank you for this sweet poem
my comments so true would appease you please you adulate you sweep you elate you and u shall smile forever young poetess
wow..realy liked the flow and the rhytm of the poem..so very beautiful...great one Anju.enjoyed it very much..not like some sick poems I read from recently.. cheers Anju.//cheers and cheeers for you 10+++
ike fragrant musk’s incense....... would hypnotize you............... .................................... like blazing sunspots Would torment you...........what a love so intense yet being dichotomous by joy and sorrows in the matrix of love, that betides even by reeks of anger when love is unacknowledged on its altar of sacredness, wonderful flow of heart when heaved by sorrows, yet very passionate and poignant, write too ingenious by imagery,10++++++, thanks for sharing
an excellent beautiful poem wonderfully written...10++++
Methinks that this is your definitive treatise on love...I hope you find the real stuff and shed tears of joy (if already not) . God bless. Cheers. Subroto
dA desire tO b orignal.......isnt it strong in all of us...still Allusions... refering to someone in our thoughts in comments who somehow influence us....inspires us not by every act but just a small one......We all at some point or da other keep Alluding.....SOMEONE...HIS OR HER THOUGHTS....OTHERS WAY OF EXISTENCE....it might be anyone MOM DAD TEACHER FRIEND PHILOSOPHER GUIDE...... So ppl come get together n share wid everyone da best which VE adopt da best ve LEarn Da which INFLUENCES us nnnn Da best that INSPIRES us.......YOU r welcomed if u practise iNtEr-TeXtUaLiTy (readers) ......references to any books or works of famous ppeople is appreciated here.....Coz creativity is a VIrtue wid ALL..bt..not everyone has da strength to make people belive in onez own creativity.........like this girl i know_introducing the very vibrant and jubilant Anjali Sinha.My full score for this read.
well yeah you have sad everything and i can vouch for each and every alphabet of this poem......this is why i am a moth ready to be singed by the blazing flame God Bless Anurag
yes.... daze you.... amaze you...My baby.... sure it did yaar.... wonderful naa love u so much...
lovely title anju...cute... everything you will do to show your love and to have your love... definitely you can...by your words so enchanting and your heart so pure.. no one could not shed tears of joy of having you.... this piece speaks how sweet and lovely you are and very worth loving for... 10+++
just superb. it is when the love gets words.... the love when it wins
My love so hot like blazing sunspots Would torment you torture you tantalize you And you will shed tears of Joy. Really? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Really......... a lovely poem to touch the heart......... penetrated...........10+++++++++++++++++++++
phylosophy of life energizes the instincts of a great poet, what im experiencing while reading ur poems.... may god bless u, strenthen u to continue ur beautiful work.
A poem of love expressing the deepest feelings..unique one...