And You Don’t Remember Me Comments

It would seem that my comment on your poem about your first love could even more poignantly apply to this one. Oh the ravages of time! love, Allie xxxx

David - I've removed my previous comments on this poem because you kindly reminded me it's fictional. Based on that knowledge I think that you've managed to 'paint' a very colourful picture indeed. Intriguing thanks. Kind regards Aine

I give this a ten, thanks for sharing. -Shannon