And You Can Have It All Comments

What I would like to retire, is the thought that I must spend more and more time, energy and back breaking sweat, to see the true fruits of labor..while hours of simple hard earned pleasure, seem harder to come by...but still we trudge thru the quicksand....thanks for the eye opener...write on!

Liberty is slavery rebadged! Yes, we are slaves to relentless toil! Though back and shoulders are sore, sweet is the realized reward and retirement is mortality! ! A great poem in powerful diction and astute thoughts! !

This really motivated me. It made me think, no matter what, don't give up. -ralph

So ruddy true! The days weeks months flitting through the calendar, mundane tasks, barely achievable but with a glimmer of hope through assisted chats of colleagues. Stuck on the eternal hampster wheel. My favourite lines which held as a red spot in a painting are (Flick through calendar and season Liberty is slavery rebadged, But so sweet is the realized reward, To dream without restriction... A great piece of reality, laid down in clever and flowing words. Thank you... Karen

Great write here Danny, so true, and it`s nice to be retired!