Friday, November 27, 2015

And You Came.....! ! ! Comments

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You might come, riding on the waves
In this hope, I stood like
a rock on the sea shore
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2015

Riding on waves you come and this imagery still speaks about wonderful mind. Coming to garden for dreaming is definitely interesting. Wise sharing.10

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B.m. Biswas 27 November 2015

an excellent expression of positive thinking hoping a well wisher to come near us....an inspiring poem....many many thanks.....

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B.m. Biswas 27 November 2015

an excellent expression of positive thinking hoping a well wisher to come near us........many many thanks.....

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 November 2015

Wonderful lines, amazingly written poem on love, You might come to the garden... In this hope, I requested buds to bloom into flower......Spectacular imagery and deep love.

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T Rajan Evol 27 November 2015

A superb poem on love, Asimji...Never thought that way...full marks

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