Saturday, January 30, 2016

And You Call It Love....... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Warm cocktail of happiness and pain
Sometimes the eyes cannot hold this disdain
unsaid constricts and the volcano erupts
ending a painful conflict within
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Deepak S S 20 October 2020

Reassurance of something deeper than just frivolous playful words, Love, not pity, not sympathy, nothing, but the silent warmth of trust, care and togetherness.

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Michael Jack 19 July 2020

Yes that is what love is simple yet complicated, amazing at times and depressing the other times, so is the love.10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 February 2016

Life is like that at times; but, true love always seek for peace. Thanks for sharing.

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T Rajan Evol 02 February 2016

Title is so attractive and poem is 1000 times more appealing....Great write Asim.

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Kelly Kurt 30 January 2016

A wonderful and expressive poem. To know you exist because you love and are loved.

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Bharati Nayak 30 January 2016

Wonderfully depicted the strange feeling of love from a distance when smile travels through the tear, an instant flush warms you up, but reality shows you the mirror and you feel that it is but an illusion, a mirage and fear grips you.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 30 January 2016

There are days when you long for human touch, that one hug from someone you love or maybe from someone who loves you. This is reassurance that you exist.... Amazing poem......but nowadays our eyes and heart remains in search of a person with whom we can share all of our feelings our, pain, joy and grief....but only lucky people's search comes to an end after finding and some one's search is never ending search.....loved it..... :) :) No one is here My feelings With whom I can share..

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Rajnish Manga 30 January 2016

Your expression comes out from deep inside of the heart that makes really a great impact. This is reassurance that you exist. (when you get) Love, not pity, not sympathy, nothing, but the silent warmth of trust, care and togetherness.

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M Asim Nehal 30 January 2016

Thanks much Rajnishji for understanding my feelings and appreciating my poems.

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