Sunday, October 25, 2009

...And You Are My Tomorrow Comments

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Today is tomorow's yesterday, you are my tomorrow-
Please become my today and wipe away my sorrow!
Hear I do very little, yet what I do povides hope,
Just when I think I can't go on, I am able still to cope!
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Maurice Harris
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Derek Haughton 14 December 2011

Contemptiom! ? ! Take a road shall we two! ? ! Strained word order, possibly rhyme driven.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 20 November 2009

Love selfless expressed from the words of heart beautifully...............

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Maurice Harris

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Louisville, KY
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