Friday, January 11, 2008

And You Are Gone Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

Foresworn am I to ever view your love once swift declared to me
For false - it was and so shall be my abjuration now of thee
In consequence of what prevailed (and all that’s left of no avail)
My love for you will surely pale - all value and advantage fail
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Caitlin Hayward-tapp 28 January 2008

Another lovely one =] A little hyperbolic in places, but the message comes across clear, strong and heartbreaking and the rhyming scheme reminded me of The Lady Of Shallot (which is a truly beautiful poem, so that's good!)

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John Nightingale 11 January 2008

A fine poem that flows from beginning to 'end'.

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