And Yet I Die Comments

good start..very good end...

a flowers bloom will always fade when captured and contained in a vase for vanity. nice poem.

Oh, here's a sad poem that stirs my heart...I can exactly feel the exceeding depression from ur words. The one in ur poem is struggling against the enchanting atmosphere around her...No more thing can make her heart smile, it's really inconsoliable: ( Anyway, thank you for your great poem, it's amazing!

Simply excellant. Keep on writing and share with us.You have poetic talent.

This is a pretty good write. It was short and very clear in meaning. I thought the ending was a little weak. But overall, it was nice. GW62

Lovely poem. The choice of words was so precise and just...wow excellent lol 20/10 -Tyease

very good composition. Lovely use of words to express emotions. Enjoyed it alot

too sad u did great.