Wednesday, May 7, 2008

And Yet I Die Comments

Rating: 3.1

I see the stars sparkling so bright,
Within the moon kissed sky.
I hear the lark so sweetly sing,
Amidst the morning dawn.
...
Read full text

Angee Reynolds
COMMENTS
Samo Samo 29 August 2010

good start..very good end...

0 0 Reply
Marcus Mckinley 27 July 2010

a flowers bloom will always fade when captured and contained in a vase for vanity. nice poem.

0 0 Reply
Chang Yi Huang 23 September 2009

Oh, here's a sad poem that stirs my heart...I can exactly feel the exceeding depression from ur words. The one in ur poem is struggling against the enchanting atmosphere around her...No more thing can make her heart smile, it's really inconsoliable: ( Anyway, thank you for your great poem, it's amazing!

0 0 Reply
Ershad Mazumder 21 July 2009

Simply excellant. Keep on writing and share with us.You have poetic talent.

0 0 Reply
Greenwolfe 1962 22 January 2009

This is a pretty good write. It was short and very clear in meaning. I thought the ending was a little weak. But overall, it was nice. GW62

0 0 Reply
Tyease Collins 02 September 2008

Lovely poem. The choice of words was so precise and just...wow excellent lol 20/10 -Tyease

0 0 Reply
Tanya Stanford 02 September 2008

very good composition. Lovely use of words to express emotions. Enjoyed it alot

0 0 Reply
Blue Eyes 22 August 2008

too sad u did great.

0 0 Reply
Angee Reynolds

Angee Reynolds

Sydney :)
Close
Error Success