And Yes For One In Hand.... Comments

strong lines and a moving poem, TaMaRa

you convey your thoughts bold and bright...good work...thanks...10

Oh, if only they COULD understand one another - and yet - all it takes is one person to talk to another person :)

Tamara, this poem is a fitting tribute and a plea for the return of Palestines stolen land, I thank you for writing this poem. It is beautiful in its truth. Bob Blackwell

as i read my tears flows from my deepest heart and my soul wonder to fly beyond...the reality of today.....same with my poem the Mujahedeen....a day to reckon the present....thank you....make the best of what the Lord bless us.... a poet of momentous event....God speed

quite.............. wonderful & great

A unique brand in other's land........lovely poem....10

I agreed with your say what you did in this sweet poem... romantic one with rich idea... sweet one... love these lines The Green Land of birds always said.... NO for many traveling and yes for one in hand, can't understand.... invasion of other's land? ? you got 10+++++

i loved it1 great poem indeed with a huge cultural background that makes it outstanding!

lovely poem and wish every one there land in peace

10 good take care

well penned..............

Dear Tamara Great and deep meanings, you got the atmost feelings to say those words. Very good piece of work, keep it up.

The little gurl, stands there all alone. Her dirty hands, the tears that mat, her lovely hair, her face. Looking up, at metal birds that know no song, but death. When tears fall down, from the sky, I stand there all alone, out in the open. The ground, thy lap, I lay my head, in sleep...iip

'it's been always a game of fate when powerful one force to run the weaker race' - asif it's a very strong and beautiful write and i loved it, thanks for sharing many 10'ssss rgds asif

i am glad u understan what is really happening..................fantastic poem..10++

this is great. i really like it.

A wonderful political poem...and i i agree with you 'YES for one hand'......Merna

great social and political piece, thanks for sharing

the craving for the home land...a battered one because of invasion...i too accept this is not at all civilisation...please read my 'human shield' and 'antimatter'