Saturday, March 1, 2008

And Why Did Evil Enter The World Wearing My Face? Comments

Rating: 5.0

So innocence is just a lie
Born, broken, we die
And why
Did evil enter this world
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Ulrike Gerbig 05 March 2008

wow! what a poem! great potential, great language, great imagery! i am impressed! u.

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Original Unknown Girl 03 March 2008

Love the first stanza (and understand) . 2nd stanza bamboozled me (though it doesn't take much!) . Interesting poem. HG: -) xx

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Tsira Goge 03 March 2008

shel, Also that such Harm, same reductions К indly, whether not so? In general I not against light... Tsira

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2008

evils is something created by pathetic lunatics!

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svetlana savrasova 01 March 2008

shel shock... more..

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