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It's not clear if Patricia was a friend or a relative. 'Was' it what I picked up on. You tip your hand a little by letting us know that you have to dream to still be with her. Sharing your recollections of the times you spent together demonstates how special Patricia was and still is to you. Tom

Awww, this is so touching. Lovely, just lovely. Hugs Anna xxx

Dear Amanda My mother-in-law is called Patricia and she is such a wonderful person, so giving, when we really needed help she was there..sound familiar? Take care darling Love duncan X

This is such a sweet poem about someone obviously so special to you! Beautiful!

a beautiful tribute to your mother Amanda.. this touching poem shows how mothers brighten up our days and never leave our hearts.. All the best HBH

I like this poem.. Its one of my favorites

What a beautiful poem to write. You describe all the times you had with her with such realness and warmth. This poem really touched me. The ending is lovely and so very poignant. All the best to you, Seán

I have to say it's a very heartfelt piece- I like the stanza structure very much.

aw, just beautiful... your words paint such a lovely image of her spirit here. bravo.