And What Of Passion? Comments

An insightful piece of poetry elegantly crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Truly your passion for writing this amazing poetry shines through and touches us all. Thank you for allowing us the honour of reading and enjoying it.

Yes very good fay I wonder what we would be like without all the taboos and social conditioning we recieve from day one.Would we give vent to our primordal instincts or are we hard wiered for constraint jim

You have hit the nail on the head Fay, Sid xx.

This is a wonderfully written and expressed poem, Fay, and I must add my two cents of wisdom to agree with you that life without passion is even duller than watching grass grow! Passion is the spark of life and love, and when a passionate person is matched with a lover of equal or even more passion, those sparks of love to fly! Passion is indeed the spice of life and love, and you portrayed that most beautifully in this sterling poem, Fay. Carl.

yes indeed Fay! ! ! words of passion and love seems to ooze out from your pen! ! ! this is a beautiful write indeed! ! ... with love shan

passionate............the subtle kind............Inspiring was this read... took me out of my slouch.

Your wording was excellent in this piece

When you pack a lot of thoughts into a poem like this and wrap it all up in passion you get a fine poem like this. I suggest the reader re-visit this a few times, it will open further, like petals in the morning sun. What a good fortune we have great poets here amongst the aspiring ones. Hxx

Without passion in life, i would lay down and die my life's blood would curdle, harden and dry its my mainstay in life, why i persist passion means love, its why i exist a very moving poem Fay, passionatly written, by a passionate person!

Lovely poem, nicely examined/composed passion from different views.

a lovely write showing the different faces of passion.....10

Full of sincerity...a lovely write Fay...10+ Sue

Hi Fay. A really well written piece which I enjoyed. It rolls through so nicely, and is full of warmth and expressive feeling. As you know, I'm not a 'love' writer, but I do find your work moving. Best Steve

bewitching passion verses...nice flow to read...10

passion is superb....... and how nice to read it...........

A very interesting poetic dissertation on the meaning of passion Fay....lovely too 10++