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With or without you, I will stay,
Won't go far, from this hostage situation
Involving you and my heart.
One way or another we will fall apart,
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The imagry is vivid, clearly defining a violent relationship, the love shines through however the violence marrs it's beauty. A relationship like this could be saved with a great deal of help before moving on to this rather dark end. Excellent poem Lipstick. A big (10) from me.--Melvina--
Wonderfully executed work. Even the use of violent imagry can have artistic merit, as shown competently here.
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7/21/2025 9:39:55 AM # 1.0.0
This is awesome! It's as if I can see so clearly what you describe in this poem! I love it! ~Kristy~