And We Watched As The Moon Turned To Stone Comments

Ben- this is greeting card stuff....is that what you want? i think you want to write poetry that can be measured against the best poets writing today. yes? good. facile rhyme, telling not showing the reader, and shallow thoughts must go. find three established poets you admire, tell us about them here - quote a favorite image or two. let's both work harder.

Hi Ben, really liked this poem! 'And you can curse the world for being You can love and always regret But don’t love for the sake of loving Or love to simply forget.' Particularly struck a chord. Excellent!

Sorry Ben I seem to have run out of adjectives to describe this poem so I'll just stick with FANTASTIC! Steffi

This poem just gallops with energy and meaning! A masterpiece!