Years have passed, since we met last
Yet my eyes are wet with the tears of exodus.
Though we are miles apart, physically
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Ever so beautiful! .. Filled with such sweet sentiments! .. Very heart felt! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..........
Beautifully crafted the pain of separation
In my breath I still taste our farewell kiss Like sand in hourglass rolling with bliss....beautiful. cONGRATS
A real life expression of love is so beautifully expressed in poetic verses...lovely..5*****
Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth from the heart. Lovely and very passionate.
No distance can keep lovers apart and you justified it.5**
A lovely poem of love.Distance can not separate two loving hearts.My poem 'Distance is no Distance ' is based on the same theme.Congratulations M Asim Nehal ji for your poem being selected as the Poem of the Day! Ne
Fragrance of wonderful thoughts bring nice breath in life. A motivational poem is well penned. This deserves full..full full marks.
Your similes are unique....In my breath I still taste our farewell kiss Like sand in hourglass rolling with bliss.
So true, distance in eyes only, in thoughts you can always meet your loved ones
For the first time now, i completed my comment successfully. Hope it continues.
Asim ji, i do not know why but so many times i commented on your poem, but it is not appearing.
The pain of separation gets wiped off when we meet. Prolific poem.
The fragrance! Yes, the fragrance is still fresh... perfumed expression!