And To Thee An Hourglass Comments

Also on PoetrySoup 'a poignant and powerful poem. I did enjoy the hourglass metaphor! '

This was a true story from when I was a paramedic.

I put this peom on the Write Out Loud poetry site, here's a comment it got. 'Exceptional writing, particularly the closing line, it pins down so much and the lack of resolution leaves us reeling.'