And Time, A Burning Flame Comments

Moisturise...smile.....and move on. Works for me, but I may be a heluva lot girlier than you I suspect: -) Great writing...thank you so much for sharing.

I think this is my favorite of yours I really enjoyed it. :)

Small, but beautiful! ! The contrast between expectations and reality especially at a later stage of life is effectively brought out! A commendable job!

I enjoyed this poem, good job.