Saturday, November 8, 2008

And They Lived Happily Ever After Comments

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He said he loved her
He said he cared
He said he would always be there
She believed every word
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Sweet Death
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The weight of waiting is so weighty that it wounds and wearies the soul. Satuated with sadness. Keep writing.

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Your pen name is the opposite to that beautiful song ' sweet thing'..., so is your story... I really don't like sad poems - I'll go for the song - it's been written and sung by a men who loves his wife and I believe this couple will last together till their very sweet end...

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Midnight Blood 08 November 2008

it just proves that people can say something, but only for their enjoyment, my hearthas been through that many times, and the scars on my neck, wrists, and heart tell the stories

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Joseph Poewhit 08 November 2008

Many love stories in life - interesting

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