The damsel’s,
quiescent buds were bursting in bloom,
“shall I take these buds away”,
said the audacious frosty knave,
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Lovely, Anjali. I loved the line 'Till the golden canopy of the evening sun'
happy ending means everything is fine....so what would i tell abt the tale poem........so i think i should say lovely cute and marvolous work........keep writing
And they lived happily after their tree of concubinal bliss bore the leaves of peace and flowers of laughter As always Good Work 10++++A++++
I knew I loved you when I realized that there was no one else I would rather laugh, cry and make memories with: : well done Anju
A nice poem elaborating the love-scotch maturing well with times....well done. Angilina
such a cute love story n tht too with a happy ending......perfect :)
And they lived happily ever after is a perfect end every1 wishes for..and they way ur poem ended evry1 would be wanting to be the Prince of ur poem........PERFECT
it was wonderful, the lithe movement of the words was wonderful and the word choice exquisite another great work Anju Love, Timothy PS> yeah they fixed it
this is a cute poem. I love the flowery language. It makes the poem seem more exotic.
you are a sweet poet.i am smelling blood.you are running after love.who will be unforgetable.ofcourse you anjalii
Lovely story with beautiful imagery.Simply loved it.A 10 for your poem.
Lovely dreamy write, I enjoyed reading it very much, 10 Lynda xx
when i started reading the poem i fell in a trance with this poem and would have loved if i stayed in it forever..couldnt u have written some more lines Anjali.....see it ended so soon and i wanned more of it...A creation of a genius...thanks Anjali and keep writing.. :)
Beautiful poem. Loved how the words you used brought me back through time. To a time of 'happily ever after'. Thank you.