Wednesday, August 27, 2008

And They Lived Happily Ever After Comments

Rating: 5.0

The damsel’s,
quiescent buds were bursting in bloom,
“shall I take these buds away”,
said the audacious frosty knave,
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ANJALI SINHA
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Dans Only 28 May 2009

Beautiful poem. Loved how the words you used brought me back through time. To a time of 'happily ever after'. Thank you.

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Mahfooz Ali 15 March 2009

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 19 January 2009

lovely poem..what lovely love story

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 27 December 2008

Lovely, Anjali. I loved the line 'Till the golden canopy of the evening sun'

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 25 December 2008

happy ending means everything is fine....so what would i tell abt the tale poem........so i think i should say lovely cute and marvolous work........keep writing

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 December 2008

And they lived happily after their tree of concubinal bliss bore the leaves of peace and flowers of laughter As always Good Work 10++++A++++

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Sebastine Humaemo 04 December 2008

nicely penned.....thanks for sharing..

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Monlano Kim 27 November 2008

I hope i get a happy ending...love the descriptions

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Jathin Aka Jesuzz 31 October 2008

a feel good poem.......

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Raunak Sharma 17 October 2008

I knew I loved you when I realized that there was no one else I would rather laugh, cry and make memories with: : well done Anju

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Harish K. Thakur 08 October 2008

A nice poem elaborating the love-scotch maturing well with times....well done. Angilina

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Shalabh Gupta 27 September 2008

such a cute love story n tht too with a happy ending......perfect :)

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Tushar Anand 13 September 2008

And they lived happily ever after is a perfect end every1 wishes for..and they way ur poem ended evry1 would be wanting to be the Prince of ur poem........PERFECT

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it was wonderful, the lithe movement of the words was wonderful and the word choice exquisite another great work Anju Love, Timothy PS> yeah they fixed it

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 05 September 2008

this is a cute poem. I love the flowery language. It makes the poem seem more exotic.

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 04 September 2008

you are a sweet poet.i am smelling blood.you are running after love.who will be unforgetable.ofcourse you anjalii

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Koyel Mitra 04 September 2008

Lovely story with beautiful imagery.Simply loved it.A 10 for your poem.

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Lynda Robson 01 September 2008

Lovely dreamy write, I enjoyed reading it very much, 10 Lynda xx

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If this symbollic of your life, FabuLous! !

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Tushar Anand 30 August 2008

when i started reading the poem i fell in a trance with this poem and would have loved if i stayed in it forever..couldnt u have written some more lines Anjali.....see it ended so soon and i wanned more of it...A creation of a genius...thanks Anjali and keep writing.. :)

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