You've had too many sad days
You can't even count the ways
You've thought of suicide
Or simply wished you'd die
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The last two lines express loads and loads of sorrow. Wonderful!
Rhyming lines of 6 to 8 syllables present a long lasting melancholy poem.
i'm sorry you have lost there are pepl who can help. i loved that poem and can't wait to read more
K & B >>>Good verse going on here...Excellent structure...mellifluously smooth...Solid Penning. ~ FjR ~
Expresses sorrow due to the loss of someone close to you! 😑