Friday, May 4, 2007

And Then Your Gone Comments

Rating: 4.3

You've had too many sad days
You can't even count the ways
You've thought of suicide
Or simply wished you'd die
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Kille and Brim (young poets)
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Ponnuswami Selvaraj 05 December 2017

Expresses sorrow due to the loss of someone close to you! 😑

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Rajendran Muthiah 13 May 2017

The last two lines express loads and loads of sorrow. Wonderful!

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Rajendran Muthiah 31 January 2012

Rhyming lines of 6 to 8 syllables present a long lasting melancholy poem.

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love and death 18 June 2007

i'm sorry you have lost there are pepl who can help. i loved that poem and can't wait to read more

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K & B >>>Good verse going on here...Excellent structure...mellifluously smooth...Solid Penning. ~ FjR ~

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