Monday, August 10, 2009

And Then There Was You Comments

Rating: 4.5

My life used to be a calm pool,
Still,
Serene,
Hardly a ripple disturbing the surface.
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Les Derbyshire
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Sally Childress 04 June 2010

Loveley poem - thank you for sharing it.

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Sally Childress 04 June 2010

I love this poem - thank you for sharing it. From Daffodil Jackson

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Pia Andersson 25 October 2009

'And then there was you' A lovely title. A poem that whispers - yet its clear as chrystal Excellent work.....

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Gil T 14 August 2009

Nice work, Les. I was beginning to wonder if the Muse had deserted you. I do wonder, though, if the second part isn't too understated. Don't they have smileys on here?

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