Friday, February 3, 2023

And Then She Closed Her Eye.. Comments

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She wanted to be back home
To the warmth of her bed so nice
Thinking of it was so comforting
And so, she closed her eyes
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Tanmayi Mukundan
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 05 February 2023

beautiful and lovely poem penned

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 04 February 2023

Poignant piece. Very much expressive. More often we leave before we could get back what we deserve

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 February 2023

This is so brilliant and touching that I wanted to cry Bravo!

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"… Then she closed her eyes.." gloom spreads.. good writing. Nice poem.

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