Sunday, April 27, 2008

And Then, Not Comments

Rating: 4.1

'Everything that happens where we live happens in us. Everything that ceases in what we see ceases in us. Everything that has been, if we saw it when it was, was taken from us when it went away. The office boy left today.'
~Fernando Pessoa
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Christine Austin Cole
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Kesav Easwaran 17 November 2008

an artful write on a theme that impressed you, Christine...stylish poem presentation...i liked 10

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the poignant spirituality that defines this poem caused me to return; once again 'and then not'

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Fred Babbin 21 July 2008

You're no slouch yourself. You are a little bit of the Heroin I spoke of.

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Alison Cassidy 10 May 2008

Beautifully written - inspired poetry. The fact that you share the source of your inspiration is interesting, but I hasten to add that the poem would stand superbly without it. Clear, articulate penning - in truth and with heart. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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James B. Earley 04 May 2008

My friend you write a passionate truth! There is an exaggerated realism in the memory.

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~ Jon London ~ 28 April 2008

Good write...a subject not covered by many...refreshing! ! a lot different to many a poem I've had the privilege of reading.. all the very best J.L

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Greenwolfe 1962 28 April 2008

A very unique approach. One worth noting. Perhaps, one which may be used again in replication of other things. Very interesting indeed. GW62

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Refreshingly unique subject and approach rehan

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Raynette Eitel 27 April 2008

This is wonderful. What a good, thoughtful piece inspired by that one thought. This one resonates and will stay with me a long time. Raynette

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