Monday, September 14, 2009

And Then Everything Changes Comments

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A distinct pain floods my heart,
I long to escape but where to start,
I feel crushed as I speak,
My words splinter, all is bleak.
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Nashy Lamen
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Nashy Lamen 17 September 2009

Sometimes risks ruin life... well...... nevermind...

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Logan Pope 16 September 2009

I agree with them..Take a risk.. And this is a really good poem...

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Nashy Lamen 15 September 2009

Well sometimes risks ruins life.. L.O.L... anyway... nevermind that..

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Lorena Cruz 15 September 2009

yeah... i agree with julia.. risks defines life.. without you taking it, you're changing the meaning of life..

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Julia Pascual 14 September 2009

nice write... be strong... take the risk... you'll never know if you don't try...

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 September 2009

Good poem........................

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