Tuesday, June 26, 2007

And The World Keeps On Breaking Comments

Rating: 5.0

bricks break, spread patterns around picture
frames, spider webs leading up, down, in

and the sidewalk breaks below, with pounds
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Ben Partenay
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BEAU GOLDEN 28 October 2008

yes the rhythm, the imagery, the art memorable ben.

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Ivan Donn Carswell 26 June 2007

Love the staccato rhythm, it breaks the framework while keeping a filigree of connections, and the subtle innuendo of alliterative riffs. Great piece. Rgds, Ivan

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