Thursday, October 11, 2012

And The Waters Come Raging Comments

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And the waters come raging
like a month-long monsoon
spreading their fury in minutes
and seconds, making busy streets
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 16 October 2012

Dear Thomas, thanks for your supplenting a nice thought for this simple piece from my pen. Thanks so much for responding.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 16 October 2012

Thanks, Dr. Subhendu for your positive and encouraging response.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 October 2012

And the waters come raging with the screams and cries of the stranded on rooftops the tears of those who cannot save and find their loved ones, cries crunches on path of fear as water rages to rinse by rain, beautiful description to portray art ,10+++, thanks for sharing

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