These days,
Have become,
The days,
Left in lament,
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Your feeling got mingled so nicely with the thought, that it makes us dive deep into your pain.The call is irresistible.Great work!
Wow! that's all i can say. Such a beautiful write. The beauty of your composition is that the scenes flash in front of eyes, which is anyways the ultimate goal of the poetry...Kudos Bravo
Beautifull poignant................................ Solace came.The night fell and she/he kissed away the tears.....................: O)
Let the tear fall and the pain come as the wise rise you will learn some what we ask not always be ours but what we got what life offers and that the best if we can take and that will be resolve any mistake Soul
A sad tale of regrets over a lost love, you question your motives with a new lover there is no winners in this sad situation. Inspired write!
Only a true dreamer can narrate such feelings. keep up the good work...