And The Sun Slept On Comments

you are intuitive and enigmatic..full of thought and symbolism..marvelous write

a challenge to the impending darkness. Inspired! ~beau

Amazing poem that is almost a recitation, euphoric, of anguish and darkness, unknown fears. That's how it sounds to me. Wonderful poem, Ben.

A most amazing insitful write... a definite 10!

very interesting to see how you make the sun slip into a sleep-to find peace...really beautiful words used in the perfect order..

i do not want to be redundant but this poem is fantastic as are all your others, i especially love the last line, 'cursed friend', beautiful. x

This is a great poem, good job :)

Rich imagery, original thinking. A fine lyrical effort. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler