Tuesday, September 24, 2013

And The Sun Remains Comments

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The squirrel was nibbling the sun
The tree was watching.

This is a poem I wrote in 'Tamil', my mother tongue. The word 'sun' in this poem means 'the sun light and the heat produced by sun in the day time'. I found it's the unique word in my mother tongue and we don't know how to translate that exactly with its feel. Let me know if it is correct.
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Karthika Mukundh
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Jazib Kamalvi 23 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Karthika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Karthika Mukundh 25 September 2013

Thank you Heather. Actually the first two lines are the poem. My husband translated it for me. The poem is smaller than the explanation, I think. :) The word '??????' was difficult to translate with it's original feel. That's what I mentioned.

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Heather Wilkins 24 September 2013

Tamil is a beautiful writing. Even though I can not read it I love to look at it. Someone will translate for you.

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Mukundh Nagarajan 24 September 2013

Quite imaginative and refreshing :) - NM

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Mukundh Nagarajan 24 September 2013

Quite imaginative and refreshing :) - NM

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